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Tuesday, July 04, 2006

SUZANNE: The Skinny on S-E-X


Early in my career as a romance writer (I had more than a dozen Dell Ecstasies and Silhouette Desires under my belt), my grandmother said to me: “Suzy, you were always such a sweet young woman, how can you write books with such graphic S-E-X?”

I still remember my answer to her question: “Don’t worry, Grandma, I made it all up.” And I still laugh at that answer since I was in my early 30s, married and the mother of a six-year-old son at the time.

During the intervening years I’ve written and had published more than forty romance novels, including what I call my Quaker books: beginning with THE GOLDEN RAINTREE, set during the era of World War One. TGR was poignant, emotional, had very little sex and no humor. (And is still many readers’ favorite.)

I also continued to write contemporary category romance for sensual lines like Silhouette Desire and Harlequin Temptation. In the early 90s I added in a few historical romps with lots of sex and humor. I viewed sex as another necessary component for my books, along with a strong sense of place, a wonderful hero and heroine, and the aforementioned humor. What I call my “Iowa corn-ball sense of humor.” (Yes, I’m originally from Iowa.)

In 1997, St. Martin’s Press published my first single title contemporary romance, THE PARADISE MAN, with its dash of humor, a few poignant moments, and plenty of sex. TPM was followed by several other “Man” titles. (The funniest of the bunch, imho, is LADY’S MAN.)

In 2004, I moved to Berkley, my current publishing house, with another funny and sexy contemporary romance, SWEETHEART, INDIANA. It was while reading a Harriet Klausner review for the second book set in my fictional town of Sweetheart that I had an epiphany: I was no longer writing cutting-edge sensuality In fact, bless her heart, Harriet had actually described my book as a “sweet romance.”

I’ll tell you I was dumbfounded. Stunned. Left speechless. (A rare occurrence in itself.) I called up my fellow Quill, Jayne, and said: “Tell me the truth, Jayne, have I gone soft on sex?”

I already knew the answer, of course. I had!

Times change. The paradigm shifts. Writers reinvent themselves out of necessity or to stay fresh. And I’ve come full circle in ways I never dreamt I would or even could.

I’m going in an entirely new direction with my writing, so new that I’ll be using a pen name. My hero — the most fascinating man I’ve ever created, a man I’ve been wanting to write about forever — will tell his story in a paranormal romance to be published by Berkley in the spring of 2007. (I’ll be announcing more details later this summer.)

But I can promise you one thing: I’m back writing truly sensual books, books with plenty of S-E-X.

Inquiring minds want to know: Do you like your romance spiced with plenty of sensuality? (We're assuming, of course, that it's done well and works within the context of the story.) C'mon, you can tell me. I won't say a word to anyone.

Here’s to a long, hot, and sexy summer!



48 Comments:

Blogger Cbell said...

I think the sex scenes in a romance novel are critical to the development and/or enhancement of the character. Their strengths are exposed (pardon the pun) and there is just so much freedom of expression the writer has at that point to develop the characters' strengths and weaknesses.

I mean, if he's working hard and she's compiling a shopping list... there is great opportunity for character development into their personal psyches and areas to grow them as well.

Does that make sense?

9:24 PM  
Blogger Jay said...

Good blog, Suzanne - and in a word, yes. *g*

It depends on the tone of the sex though. If the characters are strong, sensual and adult, then spicy sex scenes are part of the fabric of the novel. If they're portrayed as inexperienced or naive then rampaging monkey sex seems out of place for them. It has to remain within the boundaries of the character and their nature.

tfwzd - total frighteningly wild zamboni destruction

9:29 PM  
Blogger susanna in alabama said...

I like spicy romances, and tend to prefer straight romances where the relationship is consummated. But I won't buy a book just because it has sex, and if the sex doesn't seem to flow naturally from the tension built between the main characters, I don't enjoy it. I really enjoy the build-up of sexual tension.

I haven't enjoyed the few books of modern erotica I've bought. I'm conventional, altho not prudish, in my view of romance - one woman, one man, monogamy as the end result. They can do a wide range of things together and that's great. But if it's casual sex, continued promiscuity, multiple partners, etc... not my scene.

And I agree with cbell that the sex scenes can reveal a lot about the characters, their path to growth and how the romance partner figures into that. In fact, that's the reason for the sex, not just to see the words on the page.

I'm happy to say that the Quills do a fine job of ringing my bell.

9:31 PM  
Blogger Stella said...

You promise you won't repeat anything you see written here, right?

Bring it on, Sue. If it's too hot, I'll put on sun glasses:)

Stella

9:58 PM  
Blogger DFender said...

Sex? Really? In romance? In romantic suspense? In paranormal romance? OF COURSE!

Hey, I love a hot 'n steamy sex scene as much as I love witty dialogue, wonderful characters that I can identify with (on any level) and great places... it all goes together to make my favorite kinda reading... FUN!

Deb

vgneudu: too sleepy... lol

3:51 AM  
Blogger Emeraldax said...

I love these sorts of questions!

I think the hot monkey sex needs to fit in with the tone of the book (or chapter). It's like nudity in movies - it only works if it isn't gratuitous.

Can you imagine a really steamy sex scene in a Betty Neels book? I love reading her stories when I'm in the mood for a quiet coze. I think her male leads probably have a hidden inner freak, but that might just be me.

When I was writing my most recent fanfic, I often had readers who asked when the next sex scene would be. I told them that if I was feeling it, they would get it. I remember one chapter where I had planned to put a sex scene in there, but I just couldn't do it. For some reason it seemed gratuitous. It was a very emotionally intense scene, and the characters hadn't had sex in months, and the way the scene was set up, you knew they were going to have sex. I just couldn't write it. It seemed like it was gilding the lily. So I left it up to the readers' imagination. The readers weren't disappointed by the chapter, they loved it. But I made it up them anyway by writing an unrelated one-chapter fanfic where the whole focus was on sex. It shows that I'm not afraid to write about sex, I just gotta be feeling it for that story.

Anyway, Stella, you have my interest piqued and I look forward to this new book of yours. Happy writing!

5:35 AM  
Blogger Lori Foster said...

I think it depends on the author's voice, and her level of comfort.
One of my most favorite historical authors is Julie Garwood, and I would say that she writes very sweet love scenes. It's all emotion, and nothing graphic. But I love them. Whenever I'm in a bad mood, or a funk, a reread of Honor's Splendor or Lion's Lady or the Bride can perk me right up.

Then again, I love Stella's super sexy novels, and Catherine Coulter's, and Linda Howard's...

Whatever direction you take, Suzanne, I'm sure it'll be fabulous.

Lori

6:02 AM  
Blogger Emeraldax said...

I meant Suzanne! Sheesh. Need to finish drinking morning coffee before I write these.

6:16 AM  
Anonymous Lori of Canada said...

Absolutely!!! Like others, I think the sex has to suit the characters. Nonetheless, bring on the spicy!!

Lori M.

7:46 AM  
Blogger robin said...

I second lori of canada's "bring on the spicy!"

Definitely. Probably one of the reasons why I'm loving Lori's books so much. :)

8:44 AM  
Blogger TashaDMS said...

I love a novel with a well written sex scene. In fact I have seen several authors drop them from their recent books and it saddens me. Suddenly the characters are together and then some where between the lines they had sex. You're just never sure where exactly it happened. I really don't like that. I have to agree with Susanna from Alabama, I don't care much for some of the modern erotica where the sex is gratuitous and there are several partners involoved. That really isn't my scene. But one of my very favorite sex scenes is from EL's "Only Mine." In fact, most of her romance books are filled with love scenes that nearly make the pages burn. Now that's my kind of romance novel (or any other kind of fiction for that matter).
So I'm with everyone else, if the scene fits with the characters and the story then bring it on. The hotter the better.

9:30 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I enjoy reading anything from children's books to sensual and even spicy as long as it doesn't read like a sex manual and ends up having no plausible story line with an HEA ending. I'm very traditional in that. I can remember when one of my classmates giggled and pointed out a very innocuous passage to me and said, "That's where the parents are doing it." Or words to that effect. That was back in the late 50s-early 60s and that's what books were like then and they are still some of my favorites. Authors put a lot of thought into character and how the character expressed romanticism and sensuality without necessarily being sexual.

There was a time where I read erotica--mostly French, but those days are past. No sex manual but sensual and sexual scenes in appropriate places are definitely all right with me. But I can equally wait until they are married, or do without them. That's why I like the marriage of convenience stories, I guess.

I know I'm showing my age and maybe my upbringing again. But you did ask for opinions. So whatever you feel like writing--except afore-mentioned sex manuals--bring it on. I think I've read only 1 of your "big" books so far. I'm trying to find "Sweetheart, Indiana" before I tackle "Goodnight, Sweetheart." Hope I can find it somewhere. Even our library system doesn't have that one. I'll have to look in the smaller regional libraries and second-hand bookstores. The rest, I think, are all down in the basement somewhere. I should check your list against mine as far as I've got books catalogued.

11:24 AM  
Anonymous Ranurgis said...

Where did my name go on that one?

Actually, by now you should all know who needs to converse in longer comments, right. Rarely anyone else to talk to about things I enjoy doing most, like reading.

11:26 AM  
Blogger elizabeth said...

S-E-X in my books?

Ya think?

Bring it on, babe. I'll buy a new pair of asbestos gloves. :-)

11:27 AM  
Anonymous Tammy said...

LOL, Loved the blog!

As for sex in books - bring it on, as long as it's like you say well written, and helps move the story forward and/or helps character development.

If I didn't like sex in my stories I wouldn't have recently read books by: Robin Schone, Laurell K. Hamilton or Lora Leigh.

Any quill writes it I'll read it.

11:39 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

One author, who will remain nameless (and I assure you is not one of the lovely Quills), used to write some of the best romantic suspense on the market (heavy on the romance). Her works had the most incredible characters and emotional relationships I've ever read. However, over time this author shifted from romantic suspence to strictly suspense/mystery. As her popularity on the mystery circut grew, her older works were re-released with covers that reflected the suspense aspects of the works, rather than the "flowery" covers from years past. When I lost several of this author's books in a fire, I replaced them with these new releases. When I re-read the first book, I though I was losing my mind! Pharses and scenes I specificlly remembered were gone!!! These missing pieces were all from the sex scenes or intensly romantic parts of the books. In essence, I felt sold out as a fan, and not because I missed some specific part of a steamy scene. This author (or publishing house)had "dumbed down" the romance to appeal to the broader myster/suspense audience.

So, what's my point? Sex scenes can be an incredible part of those intense relationship stories we drool over. For this nameless author, these scenes were an integral part of her characters' development. By watering down these scenes, she also watered down the relationships that made the book a fan favorite. Basically, these books went from stellar romantic suspense, to an average mystery.

12:11 PM  
Anonymous Julie Rowe said...

Do you like your romance spiced with plenty of sensuality?

My answer is, that depends on the characters and their story.

One of my favorite romances of all time has the most scintillating sexual tension, but the actual sex occurs almost completely off stage (I assure you, that doesn't affect the "hot and bothered" syndrome suffered by the reader one bit).

For me the sex has to come naturally from the characters, their conflict and their story. If it doesn't it's a complete turn off.

Cheers, Julie Rowe

12:49 PM  
Anonymous LauraT said...

Jay, I like what you said about sex sort of matching the characters! When there is amazing chemistry, there must be something amazing in the love scenes. & Suzanne "Here’s to a long, hot, and sexy summer!"

So far so good... the releases in Romance Novels this year are absolutely stellar. All I need is a beach to go with my Sangria and books :O).

1:05 PM  
Anonymous Beth W said...

I don't read romance for the sex.

Not that it isn't a nice bonus :)

But I don't need to have hot sex in a book to enjoy it. Steamy or sweet, it's all in the story and in the characters. Sometimes it's best left to the imagination. Sometimes you need to bring on the heat.

4:57 PM  
Blogger Bookstoredeb said...

Sex for the sake of sex, no.

Sex that inhances the characters and storyline of the book...bring it on.

Are you going to tell us your pen name or did I miss it? I want to know what to watch for!

5:15 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

While I can certainly find books to read with less than asbestos glove scenes, I tend to find out more about the author's abilities when reading a seriously hot sex scene. It's difficult to admire their craft when reading about heaving bosoms and burning loins, but it is equally hard to admire some of the more outrageous erotica works which seem to be more concerned with inserting tab A into slots B, C and D. I think they are going more for shock value than good writing. At my age I tend to appreciate craft over quantity - in RL and in novels!!
If my interest and imagination are piqued in a hot scene, then I am more likely to carefully read the other parts of the work as well. If I'm yawning then I'm switching books faster than the proverbial bullet.
I find it very interesting that all three of my daughters(Gen X, Y and Z) skip over the sex scenes, while dear Old Middle Age Mom reads them carefully. Not precisely for voyeurism, or to remind myself of Days of Yore, but to glean essential info about the characters. A well written romp can show humor, passion and intense emotional commitment. A poorly written one is back to inserting those tabs & slots - and I gave up on the old bodice ripping style of No No!! take me take me anyway along about the time I gave up fighting gravity.

As a side note, has anyone EVER read a book where (if it must be mentioned) the hero is less than amazingly endowed?? Apparently there are no 'average' men!! Makes me wonder if a study should be done to see if males are increasing their sizes in other than height and weight as the generations progress. I guess vitamins are astoundingly effective :>P.
MomSear the Ever Irreverant

5:24 PM  
Blogger Amy from Ohio said...

Hi,

I am a new blogger, but I thought that this was an intersting topic. I do like to have some "S-E-X" in the books, but I think that adding Lori's "Alpha Male" personality into the mix is a part of the whole package. I can go back and read any of her Buckhorn brothers books and the enjoy not only the sex scenes, but the leading up to them too. Maybe it's the sexual tension??? In Julie Garwood's historical novels, the sexual tension is sometimes palpable.

Oh well, thanks for letting me share my opinion.

Amy

5:54 PM  
Blogger talpianna said...

Not only do I think that there should not be any sex scenes in romance novels, I think that the writers should not be allowed to have sex, either.

If they want children, they should find them under cabbage leaves like everyone else.

But then, I live by myself in an underground burrow, so what do I know?

More seriously, I don't care much about the sex scenes; I can take 'em or leave 'em and usually skip them on rereading. I guess I was just born to be an old maid (or a Mole, if there's a difference).

netas -- No ecstasy; Talpianna abhors sex.

6:15 PM  
Blogger Suzanne Simmons said...

bookstoredeb asked: Are you going to tell us your pen name or did I miss it? I want to know what to watch for!

I haven't officially announced my new pen name (two of my great-great-grandmothers' names) because of a snafu with the web site. But I will be eager to share it once that little problem has been resolved. :-)

6:16 PM  
Blogger Suzanne Simmons said...

amy from ohio wrote: In Julie Garwood's historical novels, the sexual tension is sometimes palpable.

Welcome to the blog, Amy!

Excellent observation. I loved reading the early Julie Garwood historical romances, too!

6:21 PM  
Blogger Suzanne Simmons said...

Thank you everyone! I appreciate you taking the time to post and tell me you enjoyed the blog. You all made so many excellent points about sensuality and sexuality in romance novels.

As I said, here's to a long, hot and sexy summer! (At least in our books.)

6:39 PM  
Blogger Karibear said...

Sex is part of life. I'd think it would be difficult for anyone to create a 'realistic' romantic fantasy without it - with, of course, the exception of Georgette Heyer, but she's in a class by herself.

I don't particularly enjoy reading about sex for ses' sake - if I did, I'd read The Joy of Sex. I want a fantasy with some degree of realism and escapism. On the other hand, in my far and distant youth, I thoroughly enjoyed Justine and Juliette by de Sade, and I Am Curious [yellow[ and [blue] and Candy. Amazing how one's tastes change... now there has to be a real story line. Having said all that, one of my all-time favorites is The Sotweed Factor, and I have no clue as to where that would be placed other than general fiction.

10:06 PM  
Anonymous AgTigress said...

Karibear said: Sex is part of life. I'd think it would be difficult for anyone to create a 'realistic' romantic fantasy without it

Not really. The details of sexual intercourse do not need to be described to evoke it in the mind of the reader. Remember that up to the 1960s or so, mainstream novels did not include graphic sexual description because to do so was, to varying degrees in different countries, actually illegal. Eating is frequently described in books, but elimination usually is not: we do not find that this makes a book 'unrealistic', because we take some things as read. Realism, even in our own memories, is always selective and always subjective.

The other point you raise about changing tastes during one person's lifetime is an important one. The tastes and interests of both writers and readers naturally change and evolve as they get older, in sexual matters as in so many other aspects of life.

2:53 AM  
Anonymous LauraT said...

Ok, I have to say it, if I read a romance novel with NO sex, I feel cheated. Just the way I would feel cheated in a murder mystery if they never solved the murder. I mean all of the sexual tension buildup, and then we never get to see them come together.. I don't know, and I would also be lying if I didn't say that without the sex scenes like Stephanie Laurens, Christina Dodd, Lisa Kleypas, Elizabeth Lowell, all of the "rwq" ladies, I wouldn't be as happy to read romance. I really do enjoy the sex scenes haha. Especially when an author goes all out and is creative and telling and moving the characters either closer or farther apart. Like in Until You by Judith McNaught. I mean it's a mastery and an art to make the sex scenes so beautiful and moving. I can't say that I don't get goose bumps, that I sometimes drop the book and of course cheer for the author who did such a great job in writing a gratifying romance. It's def. a sexy-hot summer for romance novels. I don't think I've ever read so many great books back to back in one summer~!

6:01 AM  
Blogger Billie said...

I think the sexual tension is very important, not only does it keep us interested, but for those of us who are currently without a significant other, we can dream that we'll find a partner just like those alpha males. As for the actual sex scenes, I'm not a prude, but more often than not I just skip forward.

6:09 AM  
Blogger Shiloh Walker said...

Inquiring minds want to know: Do you like your romance spiced with plenty of sensuality?

Yep. High levels of sensuality, with or without sex scenes, can make or break a book. As for the sex itself, as long as it's well written and integral to the plot... I love reading good, hot sex scenes.

7:59 AM  
Anonymous Kat said...

I recently ventured to a new author outside my 'known and loved ones' *gasps*, and read two books by Susan Donovan, "Knock Me off My Feet", and "Public Displays of Affection".
Now I am someone who was started on romances early, I think I read my first one, Amber Beach by EL when I was fifteen. At that time I had no clue what was going on between Jake and Honor. Four years later, after re-reading it, a light bulb clicked on and I had an "OH!" moment.
So anyways, back to my first statement, I only buy and read books by authors I know and love, and getting those two books was a huge thing for me. I started reading when it comes to Susan Donovan, she holds back nothing. I was shocked at first. I mean come on, to be that blazen with sex?? Are you sure its all right? Shouldn't these types of books be in like the Desire series?
But then I re-read PDA and really understood the story line. PDA is the first book I have ever read where the word vibrator was used by the author and used by the woman. Some major fantasies of both Joe and Charlotte were played out and the readers got to witness them first hand. I have re-read some old books with a new appreciation and am more open to things I never would have thought of.

So S-E-X in books?? I say Bravo
More action and back to the 'sensual' ways?? I say bring it on!

kelhx - Katrina Englehardt Loves Hot X-tion!

9:48 AM  
Anonymous Lou said...

I personally think that sex between partners adds a very different dynamic to a relationship. I don't know how to explain it, but I have experienced it. This brings a new level of understanding and intensity to the characters involved.
As Shiloh Walker said: "As for the sex itself, as long as it's well written and integral to the plot... I love reading good, hot sex scenes."
So Suzanne - go for it!

12:20 PM  
Blogger Suzanne Simmons said...

So Suzanne - go for it!

Thank you for the encouragement. I intend to! :-)

P.S. Watch for "The Skinny on S-E-X, Part Deux" later this summer when I intend to blog about some other ideas re: sensuality and sexuality in romance novels.

2:17 PM  
Blogger Karibear said...

Stuff is vanishing! I sent a reply and expansion to agtigress and it didn't show up, even tho I got a message saying it was saved!

4:31 PM  
Blogger Suzanne Simmons said...

Oh, no, what a shame! I'm not very blog-wise, so I don't have a clue about problems. But I will forward your comment, karibear, to our web master.

Thanks for letting us know.

5:11 PM  
Blogger talpianna said...

Karibear--

I've found that one of the most common causes of posting problems is that between the time you start writing your reply and the time you actually try to preview/post it, someone else posts.

One way of getting around this is to write you message on Notepad or an e-mail form, then copy it here when it's finished and post immediately. The post may not go through and have to be re-sent, but you won't lose the text.

rsopvpwt -- Really smart opossums preview, post post with typos.

5:14 PM  
Blogger Karibear said...

I did that! And I deleted what I said, so I have no clue. Something about early stuff - 1940s-50s - like Forever Amber [only female writer I can remember] and a bunch of others, who happen to be male. I guess one could get away with more then, being male.

Sigh. I'm sure I was quite erudite and relevant.

8:10 PM  
Blogger Lori Foster said...

Hey Amy from Ohio, thank you!
I'm flattered. :::big grin::::

Love everyone's opinions. Very interesting stuff. I think most feel the same way - that when it works for the characters, great sex is... great!

Hope everyone has a nice weekend.

Lori

1:18 AM  
Blogger Suzanne Simmons said...

karibear, I know exactly how you feel! I lost an eleven-page scene once and no matter how hard I tried to reconstruct it, I knew it would never be as wonderful or as erudite as the original. (I think something similar has happened to most of us at one time or another.)


Have a great weekend everyone!

7:47 AM  
Blogger Stella said...

Sympathies to those who have lost posts. Grrrr, when that happens to me I usually have to shut myself in a room and stomp around for a bit.

My system for postus interruptus is even more rudimentary. I open an e-mail window to compose then cut and paste.

Stella

10:42 AM  
Blogger Karibear said...

Losing a post is in the annoyance category. The worst one I ever lost was about 50 pages of hand-written manuscript. I can't even say it was 'lost' because I knew exactly where it was - part of the rubble left after my house burned. The only good thing was that all pets were outside and kids were visiting, so nothing living was harmed.

5:30 PM  
Blogger celticlass said...

like Lori said "...great sex is...great!"

8:41 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Since you promised not to tell . . . . .

I like my books tame and I like my books so hot my eye brows singe. I just plain like books. Sex written within the context of a story is great. Sex is great. So why not want to read about it in a book?? I love the anticipation of the first sex scene in a book, especially when the chemistry of the characters is well developed. If I wanted to read just sex I would go buy a Penthouse Letters (do they still print those I wonder?) or watch an adult video.

I've ventured on the wild side with my reading. Ann Rice's "Beauty" trilogy was a little crazy, as was the "Marketplace" books. Both sets of books are smutty (lack of a better word there, sorry, that's why I read not write). I'll admit I enjoyed them for the most part though I wouldn't be caught dead reading them in public or around anyone other my husband. Like a teenage boy hiding a girly magazine they are shoved in my sock drawer. I don't know what to do with them. I can't bring myself to throw them away, after all they are books, but I don't want to own up to having them. It's funny really.

I got off track.

Great characters + intriguing plot + hot sex = a great book.

Take out the sex and the book is still great. You write it, and I will read it. Feeling kinky, go kinky, I'll read it. Feeling "sweet"? Keep it sweet. I'll read it.

Yeah, I'm not signing my name to this one. Like I said no one but my husband knows. (Smile)

11:25 AM  
Blogger cate said...

Yes, plenty of it, Suzanne! =0
I'll ring a bell if you've crossed the good taste line. Not!

When I'm reading about a couple, I'm getting a peek at their courtship. If it doesn't cook a bit, I wonder how can they know they're meant to be? Relationships ride the waves of emotions, some of those waves have to be intense! I love to read about the ways couples meet, what attracts them, if they use humor and/or romance...inquiring minds DO want to know.

So Suzanne, it's all good! Bring it, I can't wait!

4:42 PM  
Blogger Kat said...

Kinda off topic, but Suzanne you mentioned the title...
In TPM, when Jane is attacked by the jelly fish is she laying on the beach or just coming in from the water or what??

ANyways...Sex scenes should come and go as often as necessary...Be as hot, kinky, sweet, slow, whatever. The sex scenes in the book don't make or break it, they just add a spice to it!

rwnpsv- Real Women Never Pause, Stop, or Veer

11:18 PM  
Blogger Suzanne Simmons said...

kat asked: In TPM, when Jane is attacked by the jelly fish is she laying on the beach or just coming in from the water or what??

To answer your question, kat: In Chapter 9 of THE PARADISE MAN, Jane is floating on her back on the water when someting brushes against her leg. She stands up in the warm, shallow water, wades closer to shore and can then see it's a jellyfish.

FYI: That scene is based on a real-life experience of a nurse I know. Luckily it wasn't one those "lethal" jellyfish in her case, but she said the pain was excruciating.

8:09 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Suzanne - my grandmother said something totally different from yours and really made me laugh. She told me that if the boys can go out and sow their wild oats before settling down, then I should too!

I agree with the others that said if it fits the book and characters then go for it. But if it's just to sell books - forget it, you'll loose readers with random sex scenes. I'd rather have a "love" scene than a "sex" scene. The story should dictate the length and depth of the scene - not the body parts! LOL

Also, sometimes even us old farts can learn something new to try on our DH's or DF's!

3:13 PM  

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