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    Tuesday, February 27, 2007

    ELIZABETH'S EVIL TWIN PLAYS WITH LOADED WORDS

    Let's play a game.

    Reviewer One: Mazie Meets Mason is an overwritten, formulaic, sentimental romance.

    Reviewer Two: Mazie Meets Mason is a lush, archetypal, emotional story of love.

    Guess which reviewer liked the book?

    Easy, huh. Reviewer number two.

    But they both described the book in the same way.

    OVERWRITTEN/LUSH

    FORMULAIC/ARCHETYPAL

    SENTIMENTAL/EMOTIONAL

    Guns aren't the only thing that can be loaded. Words can be, too.

    SO LET'S HAVE SOME FUN.


    Let's set up words that say "I hated it" next to "I loved it."


    plodding/detailed

    overplotted/intricate

    bodice ripper/romance

    turgid/layered

    purple prose/lyrical writing

    unbelievable/imaginative

    silly/entertaining

    stupid/charming

    tear-jerker/moving

    lurid/sexy

    graphic/really sexy

    childish/cute

    slow/thoroughly developed

    slapstick/drawing room comedy



    Okay, it's your turn to match loaded words.



    AND SHARE THEM WITH US!


    And the next time you read a review--or a newspaper article--look at how the author LOADED it.


    You'll never look at things quite the same. ;-)



    *exit evil twin sister*

    30 Comments:

    Anonymous Anonymous said...

    Elizabeth, this is fun. Just a few:

    ridiculous/fun-filled
    long/sweeping
    boring/quaint

    Real estate is also a great place for loaded words.

    Carolyn

    12:42 PM  
    Blogger Stella said...

    overexplicated--clear


    Stella:)

    1:06 PM  
    Blogger DFender said...

    Ha! Fun!

    Weeds/Wildflowers
    Spoiled/Indulged
    Premature/Advanced
    Giddy/Joyous
    Repetitive/Proven

    Deb

    1:31 PM  
    Blogger karende said...

    I don't know about pairing words. I get more effect from tone of voice - as in "That's interesting..." I REALLY don't want to think about real estate agents! I've gotten so screwed over at various times, I'm ashamed to admit it. The worst was when in one case, the agent's suggested 'perfect place to build a bigger house when you're ready' turned out to be a perfect spot on the adjoining lot. The next worst was when the agent swore that we had the latest as-built survey and the lot line ran up against the warehouse next door. It turned out that particular warehouse had been moved 20 years earlier, and our lot line actually ran next to OUR house.

    Sorry, one of my major soapboxes.

    Back to 'interesting' - another one is 'unique.' One doesn't have to actually say what makes the objects of consideration either interesting OR unique.

    karibear

    7:57 PM  
    Anonymous Shoshana said...

    terse/concise
    lugubrious/tragic
    obstreporous/persistent
    delusional/fanciful
    cliched/familiar
    rebellion/revolution
    terrorist/freedom fighter
    tactless/blunt
    misanthrop/lone wolf

    11:00 PM  
    Blogger Lori Foster said...

    Wow! Awesome blog, Elizabeth! Fascinating.
    I'm lousy at this, but thinking of my own books in relationship to characters...

    Overbearing/protective
    pushy/confident
    too-stupid-to-live/ trusting

    LOL. You go you!
    Lori

    5:15 AM  
    Anonymous Shoshana said...

    Fun, fun, fun...

    obscure/undiscovered treasure
    pedantic/instructive
    plodding/deliberatly paced
    inconsistent/surprising
    preachy/moral
    obsolete/quaint

    11:54 AM  
    Anonymous Shoshana said...

    P.S. I like your evil twin!

    11:55 AM  
    Blogger elizabeth said...

    Caroline--thanks to your comment about real estate, I laughed my way through one of those supermaket freebies listing homes for sale.

    :-))))

    12:14 PM  
    Blogger elizabeth said...

    Stella-- ;-)

    12:15 PM  
    Blogger elizabeth said...

    Thanks, Deb! New way of looking at proved. :-)

    12:15 PM  
    Blogger elizabeth said...

    Shoshana--you rock!

    Good work/play.

    (I like my evil twin, too.)

    12:16 PM  
    Blogger elizabeth said...

    Lori--I've heard a few of those myself, about my books.

    *snickers about stupid/trusting*

    12:17 PM  
    Blogger froggie said...

    I couldn't think in terms of publishing, or even real estate for that matter. I walked away from this blog initially feeling kind of dumb for not having any ideas. As I was changing the sheets on my bed stuff started coming to me, about food. I had a friend that always made nasty comments about the meals I served (she used to say that the pea soup I gave my kids looked like barf in a can!!) That gave me the idea for the following:

    snails/escargots
    squid/calamari
    raw fish/sushi
    raw meat/steak tartare
    raw vegetables/crudités
    raw pasta/al dente
    burned/carbonara or brûlé
    bird seeds/whole grain or granola or trail mix...

    7:58 PM  
    Blogger Lori Foster said...

    Good ones, froggie! LOL

    Lori

    4:33 AM  
    Blogger Suzanne Simmons said...

    I've really enjoyed reading everyone else's posts, but couldn't come up with a single clever one myself. I think I've been writing too much/thinking too hard, if there is such a thing. (Can we all say "brain fried.":-)

    Have a great weekend everyone!
    ~Suzanne
    aka Elizabeth G.

    8:44 AM  
    Blogger elizabeth said...

    froggie--I didn't mean to limit things to publishing.

    Thanks for helping us laugh our way out of the box!

    8:50 AM  
    Blogger nellsquirrel said...

    My favorite is:

    Cozy/too small to turn around in.

    *grin*

    10:12 AM  
    Blogger DFender said...

    short/petite
    rude/outspoken
    tactless/genuine
    pushy/encouraging
    sarcastic/witty
    bitchy/bitchy... ha... not always a bad thing, doncha know ;-)

    Deb

    12:06 PM  
    Blogger elizabeth said...

    LMAO Deb!

    So is my evil twin.

    1:16 PM  
    Blogger elizabeth said...

    Nell-I've lived in a few cosy places. :P

    1:17 PM  
    Blogger susan andersen said...

    This is great. . .but like Suzanne, my brain refuses to contribute. So I'm going back to staring at the curser blinking on that blasted blank screen. I'm pretty sure that any minute now it'll have to eat its mocking smirk. I can only remain clueless regarding where to start my new chapter for so long before the words kick in.

    I hope. Oh! Oh! Wait. I've got one.

    self-deception/faith

    1:37 PM  
    Blogger elizabeth said...

    Susan--Okay, I spewed on that one. Now I know why I stare at the screen, waiting for words to appear.

    2:41 PM  
    Anonymous Ranurgis said...

    I don't know if I can think of an example right offhand--especially since I've had a "fun" few days and I've got 1 a.m. already.

    But I've noticed how often pictures of people in newspapers or on TV can be chosen to underline what you actually think of them. And that's called being objective.

    Well, I've got a very cozy bathroom now. I can shower, bathe, go to the toilet, use the sink and shut the door--and, yes, I even have a window. However, as I open the door it barely scrapes by the sink, almost scrapes the bathtub and even when it's not yet halfway open knocks against the toilet. I do all right in it. However, I wonder how the woman who lived here before made it to the toilet. She can't have had a centimeter to spare unless she stepped into the bathtub to evade the door.

    crowded - efficient use of space

    Great subject, Elizabeth or is this Bessy, I'll have to think up a few others.

    Actually I'm just reading Christina Dodd's "Just the Way You Are" in which she also writes about Hope's tiny bathroom. I really knew what she meant. I'll have to warn all my friends before they use the facilities.

    Oye, I just remembered one of the ones that will be first to come is short and very rotund. I finally have a bed for her and now I have to worry about the bathroom instead.

    fat - rotund (a little better anyway)

    sucker - naive

    10:24 PM  
    Anonymous Ranurgis said...

    Froggie, that's a great one. It must have been in a book that I recently read that someone was trying to read a really fussy menu. One of the diners and the waiter got together to translate the high-falutin' French descriptions to the poor schmuck who had no idea what he might be ordering. The scene was hilarious. I wish I could remember the book.

    10:28 PM  
    Blogger Jayne Ann Krentz said...

    Oh, man, I'm doomed. Great blog but I have never, ever been good at this kind of game.

    Love the examples that everyone else has posted, though!

    Best,
    Jayne

    7:30 PM  
    Anonymous Anonymous said...

    Whenever I read a romance I always spot a few of these and I can't help but giggle, unfortunately at the moment I can only think of a few:

    lush: plump
    snug fitting breeches: Muscular
    brazen: outspoken
    buxom: big boobed
    original: slightly odd
    diamond of the 1st water: beautiful, elegant, original
    eyes blazing: Run virgins!

    Sorry, not real good, but I'm tired. There are a million of these in historicals and I love to reading them. Kelly Ann

    9:02 PM  
    Anonymous Shoshana said...

    Oh. Good heavens, yes, I forgot all about that...
    Ms Krentz, may I submit one from one of your own books in your stead?

    Vegetarian/rabbit food
    (From Deep Waters)
    Although it may have been bunny food, I'm not quite certain anymore... lol, guess it's a good time to re-read it!


    pig-stubborn/determined
    vaccination/Needle of Doom
    wimpy/delicate
    cheap/thrifty
    miserly/financially astute
    prescient/woo-woo
    mannerless/natural
    neat-freak/tidy
    persnickity/perfectionist

    These are so much fun! If it weren't so much work you'd almost convince me to write... lol!
    Oh, yes:
    lazy/relaxed

    11:03 PM  
    Anonymous Anonymous said...

    There is one phrase RE agents use that drives me nuts:

    "Won't last long."

    Of course, they intend to convey the message that the price is so cheap it'll sell tomorrow.

    What does it REALLY mean? Why, the house will fall apart in 2 months, of course!!!!

    12:49 AM  
    Blogger elizabeth said...

    Thanks, everyone! I love the English language and I love to laugh.

    9:15 AM  

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