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    Thursday, May 14, 2009

    On the death of a character...




    I’ve just started work on Wolf Tales 10 (yep, that’s a number ten, not a Roman numeral for those who are keeping track!) and already I’m dealing with something that’s never happened to me in a story before.

    I know that one of my regular characters is going to die.

    In an ongoing series, it’s not unusual to occasionally lose a character, but I’ve never actually come across this situation while writing. One thing I don’t want to do is spring it on my readers, because that’s NOT the kind of surprise I want when I’m reading a romance, but before I disclose the character’s identity, I thought I’d toss the question out to those of you who read this blog. I trust your opinions, as I know you’re all serious readers with a lot of ‘book experience’ in your background. I’m curious about your feelings—if a character dies, one you’ve “met” in the course of a series, do you want to be warned in advance, or is it something you’d rather find out about in the story?

    Do you need to know their identity, or is it sufficient merely to know there will be a death that’s a necessary part of the story?

    Personally, I want to know what to expect, but then I’m the kind of reader who will flip to the end of a book if there’s any doubt about the ending. I hate getting to the end of a story and finding out the hero and heroine aren’t actually going to have their HEA! On the other hand, I know that Wolf Tales 10 will have a very happy and satisfying ending to it in spite of the death, but it’s not going to be an ending that’s easily reached. And, because this is an ongoing series, it’s an ending that will be explored again in the next book as my characters grow and develop within the parameters of their roles.

    The weird thing is, while I don’t plot my stories ahead of time, I do have a general idea what direction my tales will take. With this particular character, I realized almost from the beginning that she wouldn’t be in the series for long. I would reread my work at the end of the day and discover she’d been left out of a scene entirely, or when I’d go to write her dialogue, she would become uncharacteristically silent. It was almost as if, once introduced to the series, she made her appearance and then began to fade away. Preparing me, as the author, for her demise? I don’t know, but I do know that when I started putting together ideas for Wolf Tales 10, the very first thing that occurred to me was her death, and what it would mean to her mate and his future within the pack.

    So that’s my question, and it’s one that will actually determine the blurb on the back of the book—do I let my readers know in advance that one of my Chanku won’t survive the first chapter, or do I keep it a secret and allow readers to find out on their own? And if I do announce that a Chanku will die, do I give her name or leave it to the reader to discover?

    Thank you—your input is really very much appreciated! This is one of those situations where I honestly don’t have the answer.

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    69 Comments:

    Blogger GatorPerson said...

    I'm looking forward to a novel in a series wherein the author has announced one of the main characters dies. I'm rooting for the one I care about least. The early announcement is also enticing me to read it as soon as it comes out.

    In a series, I think it's nice for the back blurb to let the devoted reader know a main character will die, but not which one.

    In addition, I would feel cheated if that death didn't make the story move forward. In the novel mentioned in the first paragraph, I've hatched my own story of why that particular character must die for the story to proceed.

    6:59 PM  
    Blogger Sunny said...

    I agree with GatorPerson... I would appreciate the warning that one of the main characters will die, but not which one specifically. It's a nice balance of letting the reader prepare for the news without giving everything away.

    - Sunny (formerly CJ)

    7:38 PM  
    Anonymous Anonymous said...

    Nora Roberts had to let one of her beloved characters die in the Morrigan's Cross trilogy because the story needed something to bring focus to the drama. She let her characters grieve and use the grief to draw strength for the upcoming battle. At first I was horrified and found myself grieving along with the rest of the friends. That is important to the story-the reader must grieve as well or the gravity of the sacrifice is lost. Please allow your readers and your dead character's friends to honor his or her death as part of the process of continuing their journey.
    I commend your personal courage to do this...it makes the plot of the book more important to the readers, and more realistic. In real life people die and give their life so others may live. Gather your own thoughts and go forth wherever the plot must go. Trust that you are not the sacrifice! lol

    I look forward to reading this story.
    Lynne Thomas

    7:57 PM  
    Blogger Catherine said...

    Kate
    Wow, what a question. Of course, we all become attached to the characters we meet. But, as readers, we have to trust you the author know what you're doing.
    I would rather read on the back of the book who dies, if not, I'm going to the end, middle,anywhere to find out, even before I read the book.
    Knowing a main character dies, and who, will entice me to buy/read.
    For me, hopefully it all leads to a HEA for someone, meaning, there's a reason.
    Good Luck, I know I'll be watching for the announcement =)
    Catherine

    8:01 PM  
    Blogger Kate Douglas said...

    First of all, thank you so much for your thoughtful comments. This is EXACTLY the sort of response I was hoping for.

    GatorPerson, the death of this character has to happen for the series to move forward. One thing I didn't mention is that, even in death, my characters are not entirely written out of the story, but this one will definitely be an important change in the direction of the plot.

    Thanks, Sunny. I don't like things like that just dropped on me--so I definitely intend some sort of warning in the blurb.

    Lynne, I agree 100% with you on the need for both the characters and the reader to grieve. Any character I, as an author, bring to life, has value and I can't erase them as if they never existed. (unless they're just really icky bad guys, and then they're outta here!) This story is about grief, change and rebirth.

    Catherine, so far it appears most readers don't want to know the identity, though I might consider posting it on my website for those who want to know before buying the book. It happens in the first chapter, though, so it won't be hard to find!

    8:40 PM  
    Anonymous Anonymous said...

    The characters in Wolf Tales are now a part of my family. It will be hard, but the warning will suffice. Life does have to march on.

    8:47 PM  
    Anonymous Anonymous said...

    HELLO KATE:I'M NOT THRILL ABOUT IT BUT I WILL SUPPORT YOU AND I WILL STILL BUY YOUR BOOKS.

    8:56 PM  
    Blogger Kate Douglas said...

    Anonymous 8:47--thank you. I think you'll be satisfied with the way this turns out.

    Anonymous 8:56--how do you think I felt when I realized what was going to happen? I've never been so conflicted while writing a story, but I knew I had to be true to my characters and the series. I really do hope it works for you.

    8:59 PM  
    Anonymous Jan said...

    Aloha Kate!

    I hate having main characters die. I held off reading Harry Potter because I so did not want to read about the death of Dumbledore and then I put off reading the last book 'cause I knew that one more character was going to die.

    Having said that, I, too, realize that death as much as birth, brings about changes that need to happen for the characters and the story to move forward.

    I'm glad that your character kind of gave you some warning by fading away a bit.

    But just so you know, I may only read that book only once. Lol! Just kidding... I think.

    But so long as I get my HEA, I'm okay with it. Not getting a HEA would only make me more depressed.

    Telling us fans in advance might be helpful in order to brace us for what is to come but if it hurts and we grieve, then you did a great job.

    Good luck! And thanks for letting us give you our input!

    9:24 PM  
    Blogger Kate Douglas said...

    Thanks, Jan. I promise not to sneak up on you with anything sad...which is part of the reason for the blog. I figure you'll have a year to get used to the idea! And yes, it will definitely have a HEA.

    9:35 PM  
    Anonymous Anonymous said...

    Personally, I hate surprises like that, so I vote for knowing in advance, so I can be prepared. And like Jan, as long as I get HEA, I'm okay with it :D

    9:40 PM  
    Blogger Lune said...

    It's nice the way you broke the news, very thoughtful and well done. Like you, I'm also a reader who will skip to the end of a book, so I think I can give a well rounded opinion when I say DON'T announce who is going to die. I don't need to know. If it's bothering me, I'll skip to the end. That's what I did with Harry Potter. No reason to ruin it for other readers. I wouldn't even give a hint, like J.K. Rowling did. Had she not hinted so strongly, just said someone was going to die, I might have actually read the whole thing. I didn't. I just skipped to see if I was right, then never went back to finish. It was the only Harry Potter book I did that too. I think you have said enough for your fans, and I appreciate the forewarning. Thank you.

    9:55 PM  
    Blogger Kate Douglas said...

    Anonymous 9:40, I promise you your HEA...because I have to have it, too!

    Thanks, Lune. I don't mind happy surprises, but when I'm reading a romance, I don't want something really sad dropped in my lap w/o warning. Have to admit that I read the ending of HP too, but I did go back and read the entire story. :-)

    10:03 PM  
    Anonymous Allie said...

    I get upset if a main character I adore dies. If it must happen, then I definitely want to know about it before I even start the book (like someone above said about it being in the blurb). My coping skills need to be revved up before I read something like that.

    If it was a character who was causing strife and mayhem then I want for them to redeem themselves as they go. Or leave their redemption lying around for someone else to find later.

    If the person has a mate or a spouse or something, then I really want for that mate or spouse to have some hope of finding someone new afterward, even if it just a hint at the end.

    If it is a character who is a particular favorite of mine, then I am likely to cry. I want to know in advance so I am not doing this on the bus or in the dentist's office or something!

    10:52 PM  
    Anonymous Karin Tabke said...

    Kate, I'm with Gator and Sunny on this one.

    11:50 PM  
    Blogger Stella Cameron said...

    Hi Kate:

    First, the art work is so beautiful.

    This is a horribly difficult question. My gut tells me I might have difficulty reading the story if I already knew someone I cared about would die. My head tells me that we all die and death is a part of life--doesn't make it anymore easy to deal with when you love someone, though.

    Okay--for me, I wouldn't want it on the cover.

    Stella
    Much more cheerful now, I don't think.

    1:12 AM  
    Blogger DFender said...

    Kate,

    Whatta question... I guess I'd wanna know something unexpected was going to happen but not specifically the death of a beloved character from a series in which I've become heavily invested. I haven't read your WOLF TALES series yet and have most of the stories in my TBR pile. As soon as I get 'em all I'll read 'em in order.

    That being said, I keep thinking about how sad I am if one of the characters from a series I have read has died. Yeesh. Funny how "real" these stories become to us readers. I guess the results of that death would determine how I felt about it. If it were for the "greater good"... well, then.

    Happy Friday!
    Deb

    PS... I, too, hafta have a HEA guarantee at the end of a romance read :-)

    5:06 AM  
    Blogger Kate Douglas said...

    Oh, Allie...do I understand that not wanting to cry thing! I rarely read in public because even happy stories make me weepy! At this point, I have 36 reoccurring characters in Wolf Tales, and this particular one will have been in fewer than half the books, so I don't think the attachment for readers is quite as strong. I know it isn't for me, but hopefully this will work.

    Hi Karin--I think that's going to be the prevailing sentiment, for something to appear on the blurb. The last thing I want to do is surprise a reader who's not expecting something terrible to happen, because I hate surprises like that!

    Ah, Stella...I promise to handle it very, very gently. Would that help? :-)

    Deb, it's definitely for the greater good, and it's going to alter the entire story line, so there's no escaping it...but there will most definitely be a HEA!

    7:27 AM  
    Blogger susan andersen said...

    Kate, I'd have a hard time with it if the character you kill off is the heroine of a previous book. Not so much if she's always been a secondary character, but if I've invested my emotions in a heroine's journey in a previous book I'd feel pretty betrayed to see her knocked off now.

    In that light on the cover blurb issue, if she was a primary heroine in a previous book I think the mention of a death if not necessarily a name to go with it would be a good thing.If she's always been a secondary character I don't think it it's necessary.

    7:34 AM  
    Blogger Lori Foster said...

    What Susan said. If she's a secondary character... well, all's fair. LOL
    A main character? Man, I'm cringing for you! I don't think I could do it. You're a braver woman than me!

    Whatever you decide, good luck! I'm sure your loyal readers will stick with you whether they know about it in advance or not.

    HUGS!

    Lori

    8:32 AM  
    Anonymous TAMARA HOLBERT said...

    KATE, AS A LOYAL READER OF YOUR SERIES AND ANTON CHEVAL FAN, I WAS GLAD TO HEAR THAT IT IS A FEMALE CHARACTER THAT WILL MEET HER DEMISE. I DO HAVE TO SAY THAT I AM NOT ONE WHO WILL READ THE LAST PAGE OF A BOOK BEFORE I AM SUPPOSED TO! I WILL EVEN GO AS FAR AS COVERING THE LAST PAGE WITH MY HAND SO I CAN'T CHEAT!! SO, NO, I WOULD PREFER NOT TO KNOW AHEAD OF TIME.

    8:35 AM  
    Anonymous Sheri said...

    Kate,

    First, I also love the art work! I am fasinated with angels.

    I do not think I would want to know the name of the character who is going to die. I think a little build-up would be ok. Of course, I am not one to jump to the back of the book to read what happens.

    I am only to Wolf Tales V in the series and I am very glad to hear it is not one of the first main ladies I have grown so fond of.

    I know you will give up a HEA even if we have to grief with the other characters along the way.

    Sheri

    9:04 AM  
    Blogger Kate Douglas said...

    Hmmm...well, Susan and Lori, she is a main character from one of the books. Everyone in my stories eventually has their own book, but she's also one who immediately slipped to secondary position and has had trouble holding on to that, so she hasn't maintained a strong profile. I honestly don't have a choice--when I start dreaming about the work in progress and the same thing continues to happen, I know I'm not going to be able to change it!

    Tamara, I will NEVER lose Anton. He's the heart of the series and someone who actually speaks to me when I'm writing. And yes, I probably do need therapy...

    Thanks, Sheri. I hope you like Wolf Tales V. That's the one where I actually got to have a very sexy middle-aged man AND woman sharing a book.

    9:12 AM  
    Anonymous Anonymous said...

    I love being surprised in books/TV/movies. I thought Harry Potter 6 & 7 were awsome because Rowling was not afraid to kill off any character. If a death enhances the story go for it. I am not a big fan of teasers and always enjoy something more when I don't know what is going to happen next.

    9:45 AM  
    Blogger Kate Douglas said...

    LOL...Anonymous 9:45, you are definitely in the minority here, but thank you so much for your input!

    10:11 AM  
    Blogger Christie Craig said...

    Kate,

    Great question. As a reader, I don't have to know, and while a death is disturbing, if it's handled right, it becomes a part of the journey that makes the story complete.

    Our characters deal with crap, it's part of what makes their story so interesting. I think it's how our main characters deal with the crap, even when it's a death, that can make or break the story for the reader.

    Very interesting post.

    Thanks.

    CC

    10:40 AM  
    Blogger Cheryl M. said...

    I have to admit to being one of the people who will skip ahead to find out who dies in order to prepare myself! I was devastated once, after becoming really involved in a series where the hero and heroine went through many ups and downs, they would get together and then break up and after the 4th or 5th book finally got back together for good- then the author killed the hero off. I was stunned, and not in a good way. I respect the author's decision and kinda understand but will never be able to read any of her books again because of that. That being said, I do think that giving advance warning is only fair to your die-hard fans, but revealing the character ahead of time on the book cover isn't necessary. As long as we know what to expect, I think your readers can handle it!
    * Kate, I promise I won't stop reading YOUR books ;-) *

    10:41 AM  
    Blogger Jayne Ann Krentz said...

    I'm with Lori: cringing. On the other hand, as a practical matter I do understand that you have created quite a herd of characters and, yes, it may be necessary to thin the herd....

    As a reader, I'll probably skip over that first chapter, though

    --Jayne

    11:26 AM  
    Blogger Kate Douglas said...

    Thanks, Christie. Here's hoping it's more interesting than depressing!

    Cheryl M, I can't imagine growing that invested in a character and then having them die! That would be absolutely devastating for me as a reader AND as an author. This particular character has always had one foot in the grave, IMHO, so I don't think it will have quite that much of an emotional impact.

    Thin the herd? Sheesh, Jayne...that sounds do callous! LOL...As I'm getting into this, I do feel as if it's going to work out just fine. I hate to think of ANYONE cringing on my account!

    11:35 AM  
    Blogger lindseye said...

    While I love HEA and really am hurt if a character dies when it makes sense to the story then I can accept the change. There is something to following the story to an appropriate conclusion and not forcing the scene away from one logical endpoint just because it might make people uncomfortable. Most authors get around the fact that people die by making their characters immortal or ending the story when they meet. If it is an ongoing saga sometimes the story is picked up years after the death. Romance is an escape and I certainly hope the one left behind gets a HEA after an appropriate time for grieving.

    12:19 PM  
    Anonymous Anonymous said...

    I'd like somekind of hint that something "drastic" is going to happen. Not necessarily the nitty-gritty details, but a hint of some kind.

    Louis

    12:24 PM  
    Blogger elizabeth said...

    I'm with Susan--if the character had his/her own story previously, I'd feel cheated if he/she died in a new book.

    In fact, I'd be p!ssed.

    12:57 PM  
    Blogger Kate Douglas said...

    lindseye, my characters are Chanku and don't know yet if they have extended lives--they're rediscovering much about themselves, and learn more in every book. There will definitely be an HEA in this story for the one left behind, but I can't give out too many details because I honestly don't know them. I merely have a sense of where this is going.

    Louis, that's a large part of why I'm doing this post! thanks.

    Elizabeth...I would hope that you wouldn't be pissed, but the story is what it is, and it's already beginning to come together in some amazing directions. I'm actually not nearly as concerned as I was when I first realized what was going to happen!

    1:16 PM  
    Blogger Mauvekat said...

    Death is a part of life- it happens. We all die, so why can't characters die? If it is part of the story it is ok. I am voting that you do what is right for the story/ plotline.

    Personally I read a lot of books from different genres normally and death happens there because that is what would have to happen unless the hand of god AKA the author finds a way to save them.

    The death of a character, even if they are from a previous book it makes it a very powerful statement that the world the characters live in is dangerous.

    So good luck with the novel and I will be interested to read it when it come out.

    4:39 PM  
    OpenID myrrhibis said...

    I don't mind knowing that a known character dies. Then again, I am notorious in my RL circle (and office) as the go-to gal cuz I am on various fan & spoiler sites.

    For me, even knowing - WHY did it happen and does it serve a PURPOSE? (Such as what happens to several characters in the post-RotJedi Star Wars EU books).

    As for blurb... a "how will they pull together when they lose one of their own?" or something, to me, is both enough warning & enticement/hook.

    6:59 PM  
    Blogger Phyllis Butcher said...

    Kate, I am also one who just HAS to flip to the last page when something hinky happens, but you have at least told us it will happen in the first chapter, so we don't have to search out the answer, or wonder through half the book.

    I think knowing ahead of time someone will die in a book really depends on the book or series. In this case, I believe we have all become attached to the characters you have created, that the warning is appreciated. Of course many (myself included) will now reread the previous books to see if we can figure out who it will be.

    In all fairness, who else should decide if someone should live or die besides the author (or the character herself)?

    Always looking forward to the next publication,

    Phyllis

    8:33 PM  
    Anonymous tamara holbert said...

    WHEW! ( WIPES FOREHEAD AND SIGHS IN RELIEF!) I THINK I WOULD BE TRAUMATIZED IF WE LOST ANTON. I'M GLAD HE'S KINDA YOUR MUSE! :)

    8:57 PM  
    Blogger Kate Douglas said...

    Mauvekat, my series is tightly linked, and in the past couple of stories events occurred that really sort of force what's coming. I think readers familiar with my story line and characters will find themselves agreeing that what's happened fits within the parameters of my world.
    I hope!

    myrrhibis, I like your blurb! The story will be less about the actual death and more about how her mate goes on without her, and what happens to him. I'm already getting a stronger sense of his character with this, and I've only just begun writing the book.

    That's a good point, Phyllis, though as an author, I also have a responsibility to do right by my readers, which is why I would NEVER consider just springing something awful on people. All of your comments are really helpful to me!

    LOL...tamara, Anton will always be around. I came really close to losing him in Wolf Tales VII and I knew it couldn't happen, but writing the end of that book was SO hard for me! When it finally ended up the way it did, I was totally wrung out. Anton is my favorite, even though Stefan is the one who actually started Wolf Tales. His story was the very first, but once Anton showed up, he totally took over.

    9:10 PM  
    OpenID murrrmaiyd said...

    I do like having some warning that one IS going to die, but not knowing exactly who opens the door for speculation and debate with fellow fans as to who it'll turn out to be.

    That being said, if you know ahead of time, you can be prepared, especially if it's one you really really like, and don't get so disappointed when you find out they die. Of course, being shocked and saddened by it makes the emotion of reading the book more realistic too, doesn't it. :)

    Ok, so I'm so helpful, I've made arguments for both sides...lol... never ask me to make a decision, I'll debate it back and forth for ages! :)

    12:16 AM  
    OpenID murrrmaiyd said...

    Ok, so now that I've read the rest of the comments and your replies, I can't stop going over female characters who seemed to me to sink quickly to the background who it might be...lol... I'm sitting here going "not her not her not her puhleeeze not HER!! ...but if it's this other one, that's not so bad..." (mind you that first "not her" was all repeated for the same her... I'm just being mysterious and not naming my HERs...lol)

    12:30 AM  
    Anonymous Anonymous said...

    I think a warning on the back without naming names is enough. If you post on your website that it happens in the first chapter, that should be enough for people who have to flip ahead to find out.

    Personally, I find that when I flip ahead I have a hard time going back and reading the rest of the book.

    Sometimes too much warning can be a bad thing too. With Harry Potter 5, the first time a major character was killed, it had been so hyped that I spent the entire time I was reading it tense and preparing myself to cry. I spent so much time doing that that when the time actually came, it wasn't as emotional for me because I'd already worn myself out!

    This is the first time I've heard of your Wolf Tales books and I'm definitely going to have to start going out and finding them.

    3:51 AM  
    Blogger Mo said...

    Hello Kate, most of your readers are like me, I think, in that they have bonded with the characters in this series. As in life, you react when one dies that is not a "bad guy". I could see hinting in the promo and back of the book of a change and lost but let the reader find out who it is in the story. I'm like you in that I will peek at the end of a book to see if the hero(s) & heroin(s) are still there but I want to be surprised in how the story unfolds, if that makes sense.
    As the creator, you are the one that keeps us involved and emotionally attached so that we will continue on your storytelling journey with you. Some deaths are inevitable at some time, even the good ones. I think we will grieve and go on to what else you have in store for us. Do I answer your questions as I tend to ramble sometimes? ;> D Who else but Mo

    4:42 AM  
    Anonymous Anonymous said...

    One of the major reasons I read romance is for the HEA. If there isn't one the reader feels cheated. An example is "A Knight in Shining Armor" by Jude Devereaux. The HEA occured between a descendant of the hero and the time-traveling heroine. To me, that's a cheat. If you believe in reincarnation I guess it could slide but if you believe that "you only go around once in life" it doesn't work. So I have trouble with a story where one of the characters dies unless it is after a long time together and they've had their HEA. KathyK

    6:51 AM  
    Blogger Kate Douglas said...

    murrmaiyd--you sound like me. I can always see both sides of an argument, which makes it difficult sometimes to arrive at a decision, but in this case, I know it's the right one. I actually wrote the first chapter yesterday and was able to walk away from it last night feeling as if it worked. Of course, I haven't opened the file yet this morning!

    Anonymous 3:51--I'd rather know there will be a happy ending than read to the end and want to throw a book against the wall! I regularly flip to the end, and so far it hasn't ruined the story for me. Finding out that things don't end happily means I just don't read the book at all!

    Hi Mo--I've bonded with the characters as well. They're like real people for me, which is what makes a character's death feel like a personal loss. However, in this case, it's one that goes toward the greater good...and please! Go ahead and ramble all you want!

    KathyK--you will ALWAYS get a HEA in my books. I insist on it. That's the main reason I love romances! I think Wolf Tales 10 will satisfy my readers with a happy and fulfilling ending.

    7:21 AM  
    OpenID sarijane said...

    @Anonymous: I had a problem with A Knight in Shining Armor too. I really felt so cheated.

    Kate,

    Like a lot of others, I want a warning on a character dying. I don't necessarily have to know who it is, but a comment like the Chanku must deal with the loss of one of their own or something similar in a blurb is enough for me. It helps to be prepared.

    I got rid of a trilogy I'd read and had liked and will not read that author again because the hero was killed off at the end of the last book.

    I also got rid of all of another series and will not read the author again because a main character I really liked was killed off.

    If it is a character I have really connected with in an onlgoing series, the above is my reaction especially if other characters could have been killed off and I wouldn't have had much problem with it.

    I know this is a tough thing for you to do, but you have so many strong characters and beloved characters that I think all will turn out fine and readers will understand and the HEA will definitely help ~smile~.

    Sarah

    7:43 AM  
    Blogger Venus Vaughn said...

    (aside to Kate: I found it!)

    Re: the death. In general, I don't like to know spoilers at
    all. At all. But I do like to know things like, "an unexpected dark twist."


    Also, please, please don't kill off the main character a la Ward and expect a romance reader to be happy with a ghost or any kind of visit from the beyond.

    Originating characters are tough too - those people who helped you create your world in the first place.


    Those characters who showed up in later books are fairer game, even
    if they did get their own book. But you have to give the dead
    person's mate another shot at the HEA which is difficult writing and
    will always leave some readers unhappy - but better than leaving the mate in misery.


    This is all merely my opinion as a reader. Please take all absolutes
    with a pair of pennies and a shake of salt :)

    7:50 AM  
    Anonymous Felicia58 said...

    Kate,

    I have tried to read everything that you have written so let me say that I really do want to know who is leaving the series and I do have a pretty good idea, but, let it be a surprise, I know that every once in a while I like to be thrown off and not know where something is comming from.

    10:27 AM  
    Blogger Kate Douglas said...

    Sarijane, I can't imagine killing off a hero who's been in three books with a starring role! That would be tough to take. The term I see over and over is " a character I connected with." This particular character is one I've NEVER connected with, even when she was the main character in a story, so I'm hoping a lot of my readers feel the same way.

    Interesting, Venus, that you didn't like the way Ward handled Jane's death in LOVER UNBOUND. I thought it was perfect! (But no, I'm not going to do that here) I really love the way her character has continued to develop in the series, even though she's technically no longer among the living.

    Felicia58--some readers may guess who's going, but others won't figure it out. I'm not sure, but I may, at some point, post her name on my website. Of course, since it happens in the first chapter and I always post my first chapters as excerpts, I guess there won't be a surprise for those who choose to read the excerpt. I'm not real big on surprises...can you tell?

    10:44 AM  
    Blogger Paula R said...

    Hey Kate, this is an awesome blog for today...I just love when you keep your readers in mind when trying to decide to write about something that will have a major impact on your stories as well as your readers...there are times when I would like to know when a character will die, but I prefer not to know too soon. Now that I know a character will die, my mind is now going through the character list and trying to figure out who it might be and how that person's demise will affect the story/series...knowing that someone will die, makes me want to figure out who it is for myself...adding that aura of mystery to what I am reading...

    I think that if you are going to reveal the name of the character, then you should probably wait until around the middle of the story, dropping clues along the way, thereby giving the reader a chance to figure out who it is on their own...that way, when they find out, they can feel like they have a better understanding of the why of it; at least that is how I would feel...
    it is also great to try and figure out how the other characters might deal with the loss of one of their own as well...

    Glad you got a chance to relax and read LAv...I am going through it slowly, trying to savor it...the next one is so far away from now, I want to stay in the BDB world for a while....

    Peace and love,
    Paula R.

    11:11 AM  
    Blogger Kate Douglas said...

    Thanks for the comments, Paula, but the death is in the very beginning, in the first chapter. This isn't a story about death so much as the healing power of love, so that's what the book is about. I'm already really getting into it. I love this part of writing, when I find out where I'm going to go! (Of course, it all depends on where my characters take me!)

    11:23 AM  
    Blogger Paula R said...

    I read the rest of the comments and found out that the death was in the first chapter...it won't matter when I read the book though...glad that you are enjoying the writing process...the hard part for me is to actually sit down and get started...

    Peace and love,
    Paula R.

    12:10 PM  
    OpenID sarijane said...

    Kate,

    You may find a lot of us readers do feel the same. There are certain characters in your series I have really strongly connected with and then there are some that while I enjoyed their stories aren't such a connection for me if that makes sense. I probably have a good idea of the one, but will wait to see.

    It is a sad thing to think of a character going and the pain their passing leaves, but when it becomes a way for further growth and there is happiness and love found again, its not as hard to deal with as it would otherwise be.

    As to the character dying after 3 books and being the hero in all three, yes that was pretty bad and very upsetting. All that they had been through, it was like it was for nothing and the heroine got involved really quickly after with a former lover and all was supposed to be wonderful. It really hit me so wrong. The way it was done ~shaking head~.

    1:16 PM  
    Blogger Kate Douglas said...

    Paula and Sarijane--the thing I'm constantly reminded of is that we all read books with our own set of baggage. Something that totally alienates one reader may not affect another at all. The same for the HEA. There are readers who can thoroughly enjoy a story w/o a happy ending, as long as they feel that the story is resolved to their satisfaction. I'm not one of them! That's why the resolution for this book is so important to me, along with the process that will take my hero through the grieving stages and into a chance to love again.

    1:57 PM  
    Anonymous Anonymous said...

    I am already contemplating who is going to die! I do like a warning on the back. Of course, no matter what you do, I will still read! I am completely addicted to Wolf Tales. I, like you and some of the other readers, will go to the middle, back, etc. to find out "what will happen". It's still interesting to find out how it happens afterward. You are an amazing author, so we trust your judgment.

    1:58 PM  
    Anonymous Jan said...

    I never like to read about a favorite character dying...even if it makes the story move forward...I am usually completely devistated when this does occur.

    I like happy endings...I read to relax & escape for a little while, the harshness that we daily see, in the world around us.

    Yes, there is violence in the paranormal series(and others of course), but usually the good guys win & it's only a story afterall...:-) so then, I go look for another story by the same author.

    11:09 AM  
    Blogger Kate Douglas said...

    Anonymous, when the book is finished and long before publication, I will post the first chapter on my website (as I do with all my books) and those who want to know in advance will be able to read it.

    Jan, I think, from what's already happening as I write, that it's going to be a win/win situation overall! I sure hope so...

    1:35 PM  
    Anonymous Anonymous said...

    Hey Kate! it's karey_lyn
    you know how much I love your books.. and believe me.. I sooo don't want to know who it is. Just the fact that you told me that someone will die has given me enough detail for me to wonder yet enough for me to be prepared.

    Please don't tell us who it is!!
    or better yet... give the readers the option of knowing.
    Don't put it on the back of the book! Post it on a web site with a link telling people that if they have to know then click here if they don't want to know then don't click.

    7:36 AM  
    Blogger Kate Douglas said...

    Karey_lyn, that's exactly how I'll be doing it. I will post my first chapter like I always do, but with a BIG spoiler alert at the top of the page. That way readers will be warned.

    7:39 AM  
    Anonymous Gidget said...

    I don't want to know who it is ahead of time. I understand that a story sometimes needs to have someone die to go forward. I will of course still continue to read your books.

    6:16 PM  
    Anonymous Anonymous said...

    Hi Kate,
    I'm a very new fan. I just discovered your books about a week ago and I have been reading non-stop(that's one of my favorite things about Kindle...I can download and start the next book in minutes). Anyway, back on point. I HATE it when a main character dies....hate it. Harry Potter really upset me because book 7 was blood bath, IMO. I'm glad it was the last book because I am done with Rowling. I dropped Kim Harrison like a hot potato when she killed a main character in her series. I won't be finishing the series. Where as Breaking Dawn-WONDERFUL. One death of a character we really didn't meet. As far V & Jane...I'm ok with the ghost thing, but I was mainly rooting for Butch :-) I appreciate the warning and since I'm still in the early books, I'll probably unconsciously start looking for the 'fading lady'. I want to know now. Hopefully, you'll decide to tell us and I'll be looking for that info. Thanks!

    2:29 PM  
    Blogger Kate Douglas said...

    Thanks, Gidget. You seem to agree with most of the ones who've commented. Anonymous 2:29, I will be posting the first chapter on my website when the book is done, so anyone who wants to know can go in and read it ahead of time. That way it's up to the readers. I just don't believe in dropping a death on my readers unannounced!

    9:59 PM  
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    1:04 PM  
    Blogger Kate Douglas said...

    Posting this for a reader who couldn't get Blogger to let her in!

    ++ Whereas, I am sorry to see that someone will die, I'm excited to see where the story is going and understand it's a part of life. I do not however want ot know who it is until I read the book. For me, if I know ahead of time who it is, it somehow takes away from the story, as does now knowing that someone is going to die. I will be expecting it now as I read the book, but, I do appreciate you letting us know where you were going with it, because I will refrain from reading the excerpt once it is posted on your website, and instead wait for the whole book. Once I know who it is, I will hate to have to wait for the whole book to continue finding out what's going on and I can almost assure you that I will need a box of kleenex with me as I read it as I did when Anton almost died. As always, looking forward to it.

    Thanks!

    Evelyn

    2:30 PM  
    Anonymous Annie F said...

    I am one of these people that needs to know what is going to happen to the character...I often read the last chapter or 2 to see how everything turns out. So I would say I would like to know which character is going to die--I have my thoughts already based on what you have already posted.

    12:00 PM  
    Blogger Venus Vaughn said...

    Kate, as a _romance_ reader, no I didn't like Jane's final status in Lover Unbound. However, if I'd been given different expectations from the start (eg this book is UF or Fantasy) I'd have probably taken it a lot better.

    I didn't have an epic flounce like some or declare that I'll never read Ward again (in fact, it's the book I started with), but as a _romance_ reader, I felt horribly betrayed.

    I do like the ensuing character development of Jane, and having read all the books--including the compendium--I am pleased that Jane is satisfied with the outcome. However, as a reader, I wanted Ward to pull some extra mojo out of her back pocket and let Jane breathe again.

    7:13 AM  
    Blogger Earthmom said...

    Kate, killing off a character is a tough decision, a bit like pulling the plug on a relative in real life. You sweated life into her throughout all the lovely Chanku stories already written, and it was probably inevitable that that one of the major ones would die at some point, because that is the very nature of both life AND storytelling.

    As to your revealing who is to die ahead of publication....do what you feel is right, what your gut instinct tells you to do. I've read every word you've published thus far--both Chanku and otherwise--and become a huge fan, so I trust what you feel to do.

    And thanks for letting us, your readers, have imput or insight into the world we have come to care about so much.

    Earthmom aka Maggie

    7:05 PM  
    Blogger Kate Douglas said...

    Venus, that may be the reason it didn't bother me when I read Ward's solution--I'd already heard all the gripes about it and knew it was coming, so it wasn't a terrible shock to me. Plus, she's worked Jane into future stories in such a way that the character fits, but it did work just fine for me. I don't like surprises along those lines!

    Thank you, Maggie. This character isn't a truly major one, but I honestly had no choice. When the stories start to develop somewhere in the back of my mind, they're pretty well "set" for me. I knew going into this book that this particular character had to die for my other characters to move on in the manner their stories dictated, but I also felt like it was something I really wanted to talk over with people who know the story line. (My editor, my agent, my readers...this is NOT something I wrote lightly!)

    I will definitely be posting the chapter at some point, but with a spoiler notice.

    7:08 AM  
    Anonymous Bobbie Baynard said...

    Kate,
    Thank you first of all for writing all of your wonderful books. I started with Sexy Beast II and haven't stopped. While I may not like a character (main or otherwise) being killed, it has to happen for everything to play out. I would like a heads up but I don't skip to the end. When you put it on the site, will you let us know in the yahoo group so we can look if we want?
    Yes, Jane's death surprised me, but she came back. Life is still life to me, be it ghostly or otherwise. (we wouln't have some vamps otherwise) No, I won't stop reading JR Ward because she did that. It is ridiculous to stop reading a terrific author just because she wrote something you didn't like. I personally can not wait for the FALLEN ANGELS series to come out and the next BDB book, lover mine, to come out. OOPS, need to get off my soapbox.
    Kate , you are wonderful and do what you have to do to continue the story. You can post a headsup for those that want it, and those that don't want it, they don't have to read it. Thank you for taking the time to ask your fans!!
    PS-I adore the artwork.

    12:44 PM  
    Blogger Kate Douglas said...

    Thanks, Bobbie! It's okay to get on a JR Ward soapbox on my watch--I'm a huge fan of her writing. I don't know about the Fallen Angels series. Need to check into that one!

    I appreciate your taking the time to leave a comment.

    8:38 PM  

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